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			<title>Last Gesture</title>
			<author><name reg="von Freytag-Loringhoven, Elsa" type="person">Elsa von Freytag-Loringhoven</name></author>
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				<resp>Encoded by <name reg="Larich, Paula" type="person">Paula Larich</name></resp>
				<resp>All annotations by <name reg="Larich, Paula" type="person">Paula Larich</name> </resp>
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			<publisher>Special Collections, University of Maryland Libraries</publisher>
			<date>2004</date>
			<pubPlace>
				<address><addrLine>University of Maryland, College Park, MD  20742</addrLine></address>
			</pubPlace>
			
			<availability>
				<p>Researchers can gain access to the Papers of <name reg="von Freytag-Loringhoven, Elsa" type="person">Elsa von Freytag-Loringhoven</name> in the Maryland Room, Hornbake Library, University of Maryland Libraries, College Park, MD  20742</p>
				<p>"Last Gesture"" manuscripts located in Series III, Box 2, Folder 64; microfiche id numbers 4/462-4/467.</p>									<p>Special Collections at the University of Maryland provides <xref n="http://www.lib.umd.edu/ARCV/kap/microfilm.html">more information about the microfilm edition of the papers</xref>. </p>
				<p>Images and manuscripts drafts of this poem may not be reproduced or downloaded and used on another site without the 
					explicit permission of UMD Archives. They may not be reproduced or downloaded and used on another site without the 
						explicit permission of UMD Archives. Though the intellectual property of <name reg="von Freytag-Loringhoven, Elsa" 
						type="person">Elsa von Freytag-Loringhoven</name> is in the public domain, all annotations and editorial commentary 
						are copyrighted.</p>
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		<!--GROUP MEMBERS: THIS IS THE PLACE FOR WITNESS DETAIL INFORMATION AND LINKS TO ASSOCIATED IMAGES-->
		
			<note>There are six versions of this poem, listed in the order in which they were found in Folder 64 by the encoder.  Witness 1 is entitled "Last Gesture (Memory to
				'Earnest' -- E.H.)," witness 2 is entitled "Last Gesture: To Myself,"  witnesses 23and 4 are entitled "Last Gesture,"  witness 6 is entitled
				"Treat," and witness 5 is untitled.  All are variations of the same poem.  The date of their creation is unknown, and they have never
				been published.</note>
			<note><p> The following is an excerpt from Michelle Von Euw's transcription rationale:
				The...transcriptions attempt to replicate the pages from the Baroness's collection.  In all cases, fonts were selected to match
				the originals:  Courier New was used to duplicate the typewritten pages, and Bernhard Fashion BT was chosen for its similarity
				to the Baroness's handwriting.  Majuscules were used to duplicate her own preference for printing in capital letters, and blue, red,
				and purple ink was used to denote where those pen colors were present on the Baroness's pages.  In a few places, where
				electronic duplication was not possible, handwritten inserts were made onto the pages to preserve the integrity of the
				transcription.  In a few cases, an editorial decision was made to keep certain text uncovered: the dedication to "E.H." on
				page 2 <note rend="Larich, Paula">Encoder's note: Witness 3</note>, for example, was so obscured on the original pages that it was impossible to read in photocopies.
				As the quotation hints at an unexplained mystery -- and the dedication ultimately makes it to the typed version of "Last Gesture"
				<note rend="Larich, Paula">Encoder's note: Witness 1</note> -- it seemed essential to preserve this note for future replications.</p>
				
				<p>A final edition of the poem has been constructed, based primarily on the final typed version (1) of "Last Gesture". A few things lead me to
				believe that this is the version the Baroness would ultimately want to see published: first, it is the accumulation of combinations of
				words that she apparently experimented with on the earlier versions, copying neatly onto page 2 her preferred arrangement. Second, 
				this is the typed version, and there is an implied communication (most likely with Barnes) about the product and its importance. A few 
				changes are made in the Baroness's red pen, which have been incorporated by this editor as "corrections," in order to capture the author's 
				latest intent. Anticipating that this version is to be published in print, the red ink markings have been excluded. (If the poem were to be 
				mounted on a website, the electronic copy retains the red markings, which would be appropriate &#x2013; it's exciting to imagine that after 
				seventy-five years of oblivion, a reader would be able to view the Baroness's work as she did, colorful red ink dashes and exclamation 
				points highlighting the staid black text.)</p></note>
			<note><p> The following is a brief explanation of Paula Larich's encoding rationale:	 I coded the witnesses in the order I found them, for
				simplicity's sake.  Witness 1 appears to be the "final" poem, while the others indicate the various word choices the Baroness made
				before settling on those in Witness 1.  The witnesses are often difficult to decipher, and the reader is encouraged to view the witness
				image while looking at each version.  I have tried to indicate where the author changed her mind through additions, deletions, and
				word transfers, but in many instances it was simply an educated guess. All spelling errors have been faithfully reproduced.  The reader
				should resize the browser window to ensure that lines don't wrap.  Most of the encoding notes refer to something in the original
				that couldn't easily be coded; the reader should refer to the appropriate image for more information. Additions that were subsequently
				deleted by the author are indicated in green letters with a red strikethrough.  Simple deletions appear in red letters with a red
				strikethrough.</p>
				
				<p>The Baroness wrote in uppercase letters, with the exception of the letters "g," "n," and "q."  These have been kept as in the originals.
				It is easy to see that witnesses 1 and 2 are very similar, the major difference being that witness 1 was typewritten, and both upper -and
				lowercase letters were used.  Witnesses 5 and 6 would appear to be the earliest versions, with the most rewrites.  Even though these
				two witnesses appear on the same page, I have decided to encode them as separate versions.  They parallel each other enough to
				assume that they are separate entities, and not the same one with multiple corrections.</p></note>
				
				<note>Read <name reg="VON EUW, MICHELE" type="person">Michele Von Euw</name>'s essays <xref n="../../essays/last_gesture.html">"Last Gesture"</xref> and <xref n="../../essays/last_gesture_2.html">"Recreating the Baroness' 'Last Gesture:' Hemingway, Hopelessness, and Hats of Birthday Cake."</xref></note>

				<note>Additions appear in a green, fixed-width font. Deletions appear in a red, fixed-width font with strikethrough.</note>
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			<p>The Baroness' poems and papers are contained in the Archives and Manuscripts Department at the University of Maryland Libraries.  
				Complete papers cover the period from 1917-1933 and consist of manuscripts, drafts, notes, correspondence, drawings and photographs.</p>
			<p>Textual transcription and analysis of the seven poems encoded here were undertaken in Fall 2003 by graduate students in 
				<name reg="Sherman, William" type="person">William H. Sherman</name>'s English 601 class, "Literary Research and Critical Contexts."</p>
			<p>Text editing of ""Last Gesture" was performed by <name reg="Von Euw, Michele" type="person">Michele Von Euw</name>.</p>
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				<item>Ernst Hardt</item>
				<item>Peggy Guggenheim</item>
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	   <witList> 
		<witness sigil="a1" id="a1">Last Gesture
			(Memory to "Ernest"&#x2013; &#x2013; 
			 E.H.)</witness> 
		<witness sigil="a2" id="a2">LAST
			gESTURE: TO MYSELF</witness> 
		<witness sigil="a3" id="a3">LAST gESTURE</witness> 
		<witness sigil="a4" id="a4">LAST gESTURE</witness> 
		<witness sigil="a5" id="a5">Untitled</witness> 
	        <witness sigil="a6" id="a6">TREAT</witness> 
	   </witList> 
	</div> 
     </front> 

	 <body> 
	 <head> 
		<title>
			<app>
				<rdg wit="a1">Last gesture</rdg>
				<rdg wit="a1"><del>a</del></rdg>
				<rdg wit="a1">(Memory to "Ernest" &#x2013; &#x2013;
				E.H.)</rdg>
				<rdg wit="a2">LAST gESTURE: TO MYSELF <note rend="Larich, Paula">
				 <p>(The reader will want to look at the image understand the following comments.)</p>
				 <p>To the left of the poem is a triangle, lying on its side, and inside is written</p>
				<p>DJUnA &#x2013;
					DOn'T OMIT THIS DEDICATIOn
				        IT
					IS
					GOOD
					POLICY!
					ASIDE
					FROM
					TRUE
					HOnE
					STY</p>
				<p>Under this is a line reading:
				 <sic>TREASSURE </sic>
				 	THIS POEM!</p>
				<p>Above the triangle is a dedication that has been crossed out.  It appears to say</p>
				<p>"TO ERnST</p>
				<p>&#x2013; E.H. &#x2013;</p>
				<p>Running vertically along the right, top margin is written</p>
				<p>SOMETIME I TELL YOU</p>
				<p>"[unclear] Y"!</p></note></rdg>
				<rdg wit="a3">LAST gESTURE</rdg>
				<rdg wit="a4">LAST GESTURE</rdg>
				<rdg wit="a5">Untitled</rdg>
				<rdg wit="a6">TREAT</rdg>
			</app>
		</title>		
	</head>			 
				
				


<lg n="1">	
<l n="1">
	<app>
		<rdg wit="a1">Suns</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a2 a3 a4">SUnS</rdg>
	</app></l>
	
<l n="2">
	<app>
		<rdg wit="a3 a4"><del>Falls</del></rdg>
		<rdg wit="a5 a6">FALLS</rdg>	
	</app></l>
	
<l n="3">
	<app>
		<rdg wit="a4 a5 a6">PAInTED</rdg>	
	</app></l>
	
<l n="4">
	<app>
		<rdg wit="a1">Gilded</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a2">GILDED</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a3">gILDED</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a4">gILTFACE<milestone unit="stanza"/> </rdg>
		<rdg wit="a5">gILTFACETREAD</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a6">gILTFACE<milestone unit="stanza"/></rdg>	
	</app></l>
	
<l n="5">
	<app>
		<rdg wit="a3">FACE <milestone unit="stanza"/></rdg>
	</app></l>
	
<l n="6">
	<app>
		<rdg wit="a1">Lie &#x2013; <milestone unit="stanza"/></rdg>
		<rdg wit="a2">LIE &#x2013;</rdg>	
	</app></l>
	
<l n="7">
	<app>
		<rdg wit="a2"> &#x2014;</rdg>
	</app></l>
								
<l n="8">
	<app>
		<rdg wit="a1">Lakelevels</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a2 a4 a6">LAKELEVELS</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a3">LAKELEVES</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a5"><del rend="superscript"><add>LEVEL</add></del>
			<del>ORE</del>LAKESLEVELS <add>RIgID OREgLInT</add>
		</rdg>	
	</app></l>
	
<l n="9">
	<app>
		<rdg wit="a5"><del>RIgID</del><del><add> RIGID</add></del></rdg>
	</app></l>
	
<l n="10">
	<app>
		<rdg wit="a5"><del>LEVEL <add> gLInT ORE gLInT</add></del></rdg>
	</app></l>
	
<l n="11">
	<app>
		<rdg wit="a5"><del>gLInT</del>
		<del rend="subscript">LEVEL
		<note rend="Larich, Paula">There is a curved line
		extending upward from "LEVEL" to "gLInT"
		on the line above, possibly indicating that the two
		words should change places.</note></del>
		<del><add>gLInT LEVELORE</add></del>
		<del rend="subscript"><add>RIgID</add></del>
		<note rend="Larich, Paula">There is a right-slanted line
		extending downward between "OREgLInT" and "RIgID,"
		possibly linking the two words.</note></rdg>
	</app></l>
	
<l n="12">
	<app>
		<rdg wit="a1">Stiffblue</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a2 a3 a4 a5">STIFFBLUE</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a6">RIgID
		<add rend="superscript">STIFFBLUE</add></rdg>	
	</app></l>
	
<l n="13">
	<app>
		<rdg wit="a1">Rigid</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a2 a4">RIgID</rdg>	
		<rdg wit="a3"><del>RIgID</del> <add>RIgID</add></rdg>
		<rdg wit="a5"><del>RIgID <add>GLInT</add></del></rdg>
	</app></l>

<l n="14">
	<app>
		<rdg wit="a1">Oreglint &#x2014; <milestone unit="stanza"/> </rdg>
		<rdg wit="a2">OREgLInT &#x2013;</rdg>	
		<rdg wit="a3">ORE<del>BLInK</del>
			<add rend="subscript">gLInT</add></rdg>
		<rdg wit="a4">OREBLInK</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a6">ORE<del>SIgHT</del><add rend="subscript">
		gLInT</add></rdg>
	</app>
	</l>
	
<l n="15">
	<app>
		<rdg wit="a2">&#x2014;</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a3"><del>RIgID</del></rdg>
	</app></l>	
	
<l n="16">
	<app>
		<rdg wit="a1">Birchs</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a2 a3 a4 a6">BIRCHS</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a5">BLACKSCARE</rdg>
	</app></l>
	
<l n="17">
	<app>
		<rdg wit="a1">Scareblack</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a2 a3 a4">SCAREBLACK</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a5">BIRCHS
		<note rend="Larich, Paula">There is a curved line
		extending upward from "BIRCHS" to "BLACKSCARE"
		on the line above, possibly indicating that the two
		words should change places.</note></rdg>
		<rdg wit="a6">BLACKSCARE</rdg>
	</app></l>
	
<l n="18">
	<app>
		<rdg wit="a1">Singed</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a2 a3 a4">SIngED</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a5 a6">SIngED<note rend="Larich, Paula">In between witnesses 5 and 6 is a column of words, which could belong to either witness
			or both. Because of the difficulty in coding them, they have been added as a note to both witnesses 5 and 6.  The words are as follows (please
			resize your window so you can view them as they actually appear):
			<p>DUMBECHOIng</p>
			<p>PINes</p>
			<p>SKYSHIP</p>
			<p>SOAR</p>
			<p>SLIM MASTED</p>
			<p>SKY PINESHIP [deleted] SOAR</p>
			<p>[deleted] A SOAR [added] DUMB MATURE</p>
			<p> ECHOIng  nAKED</p>
			<p>[deleted]  DUMB  MATURETY</p>
			<p>[deleted] ASOAR [added] MUSCULAR</p>
			<p>[deleted]A [added]SOAR  SPREAD</p></note></rdg>
	</app>	</l>	


		
<l n="19">
	<app>
		<rdg wit="a1">Scant</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a2 a3 a4 a5 a6">SCAnT</rdg>
	</app></l>
<l n="20">
	<app>
		<rdg wit="a1">Skirt &#x2014; <milestone unit="stanza"/></rdg>
		<rdg wit="a2">SKIRT &#x2013;  </rdg>
		<rdg wit="a3">SCIRT<milestone unit="stanza"/></rdg>
		<rdg wit=" a4 a5 a6">SCIRT</rdg>
	</app></l>
		
<l n="21">
	<app>
		<rdg wit="a2">&#x2014;</rdg>
	</app></l>
	
<l n="22">
	<app>
		<rdg wit="a1">Slimmast</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a2 a3 a4">SLIMMAST</rdg>
	</app>	</l>	
	
	
<l n="23">
	<app>
		<rdg wit="a1">Pines</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a2 a3 a4">PInES</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a6"><del>SKYPInESH</del></rdg>
	</app>	</l>
<l n="24">
	<app>
		<rdg wit="a6">PInES<del>KYSHIPS</del></rdg>
	</app></l>	
<l n="25">
	<app>
		<rdg wit="a1">Dumb</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a2 a3 a4 a6">DUMB</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a5"><del>DUMB</del></rdg>
	</app>	</l>

<l n="26">
	<app>
		<rdg wit="a1">Echoing</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a2 a3 a4">ECHOIng</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a5">ECHOEIng DUMB</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a6">ECHOIng SKY<del>SHIP</del></rdg>
	</app>	</l>	
		
<l n="28">
	<app>
		<rdg wit="a1">Craft &#x2013;<milestone unit="stanza"/></rdg>
		<rdg wit="a2">CRAFT &#x2013;</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a3">CRAFT<milestone unit="stanza"/></rdg>
		<rdg wit="a4">CRAFT</rdg>
	</app>	</l>
<l n="29">
	<app>
		<rdg wit="a2">&#x2014;</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a5"><del>SLIMMEIng</del><add>PInE</add></rdg>
	</app></l>
<l n="30">
	<app>
		<rdg wit="a5">SLIM MASTED
		<note rend="Larich, Paula">There is a curved line
		extending upward from "MASTED" to "PInE"
		on the line above, possibly indicating that the two
		words should change places.</note></rdg>
		</app></l>
<l n="31">
	<app>
		<rdg wit="a5">SKYSHIP</rdg>
		</app></l>
<l n="32">
	<app>
		<rdg wit="a1">Mailed</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a2">MAILED</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a3 a4">nAKED</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a5"><del><add>nAKEBInE</add></del>
		<add>A</add>SOAR
		<del rend="subscript">HALFnAKED</del></rdg>
		<rdg wit="a6">SOAR<del>nAKED</del></rdg>
	</app>	</l>	
<l n="33">
	<app>
		<rdg wit="a1">Valkyries</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a2 a3">VALKYRIES</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a4"><del>BEECH</del>VALKYRIES</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a5 a6">BEECHVALKYRIES</rdg>
	</app>	</l>
	
<l n="34">
	<app>
		<rdg wit="a1"><add>m</add> <del>M</del>ature</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a2 a3 a4">MATURE</rdg>
	</app>	</l>
<l n="35">
	<app>
		<rdg wit="a5"><del>BODY HALF nAKED</del></rdg>
		</app></l>
<l n="36">
	<app>
		<rdg wit="a1">Muscular</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a2 a3 a4">MUSCULAR</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a5">MUSCULAR nAKED</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a6"><del>MUSCULAR</del></rdg>
	</app>	</l>
<l n="37">
	<app>
		<rdg wit="a6"><del>nAKED</del></rdg>
	</app></l>	
<l n="38">
	<app>
		<rdg wit="a5">SPREAD</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a6"><del>SPREAD nAKED</del></rdg>
		</app></l>
<l n="39">
	<app>
		<rdg wit="a5"><del>HALFnAKED</del>
		<note rend="Larich, Paula">There is a curved line
		extending upward from "HALFnAKED" to "MUSCULAR nAKED"
		on the line above, possibly indicating that the two
		lines should change places.</note></rdg>
	</app></l>
<l n="40">
	<app>
		<rdg wit="a5"><del>COLLECTED</del></rdg>
	</app></l>
	
<l n="41">
	<app>
		<rdg wit="a5"><del>SEREnE</del>AMPLEBLOODED</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a6">AMPLEBLOODED</rdg>
	</app></l>
<l n="42">
	<app>
		<rdg wit="a5"><del>MATU</del></rdg>
		<rdg wit="a6"><del>MATURITY</del></rdg>
	</app></l>	
<l n="43">
	<app>
		<rdg wit="a5"><del>COLLECTED</del></rdg>
		<rdg wit="a6">PREPARED</rdg>
	</app></l>
<l n="44">
	<app>
		<rdg wit="a5">MATURITY</rdg>
	</app></l>	
<l n="45">
	<app>
		<rdg wit="a5">SEREnE</rdg>
	</app></l>	
<l n="46">
	<app>
		<rdg wit="a5 a6">COLLECTED</rdg>
	</app></l>	
<l n="45">
	<app>
		<rdg wit="a1"><add>STERn</add> <del>Stern</del>
			<del><add>gRAVE</add></del></rdg>
		<rdg wit="a2 a3">STERn</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a4">STERn</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a5 a6">gEnTLE</rdg>
	</app>	</l>	

<l n="46">
	<app>
		<rdg wit="a1">Gentle</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a2 a3 a4">gEnTLE</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a5">STERn</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a6">STERn
		<note rend="Larich, Paula">There is a curved line
		extending upward from "STERn" to "COLLECTED"
		on the line above, possibly indicating that the two
		words should change places.</note></rdg>
	</app>	</l>	
<l n="47">
	<app>
		<rdg wit="a1">Ample</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a2 a3">AMPLE</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a4"><del>AMPLE</del>
			<add rend="superscript">AMPLE</add><note rend="Larich, Paula">
			There is a curved line from the deleted AMPLE to the added
			AMPLE, which appears closer to MUSCULAR two lines above</note></rdg>
	</app>	</l>	
<l n="48">
	<app> 
		<rdg wit="a1">Prepared</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a2 a3 a4">PREPARED</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a5">PREPARED<add>TARnISH<del>ED</del></add>
		<add rend="superscript">MOON<del>S</del>S</add>
		<add rend="superscript"><add rend="superscript">RED</add></add>
		<add rend="subscript">RIM</add></rdg>
	</app>	</l>	
<l n="49">
	<app>
		<rdg wit="a1">Austere</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a2 a3 a4 a5 a6">AUSTERE</rdg>
	</app>	</l>	
<l n="50">
	<app>
		<rdg wit="a1">Limbed</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a2">LIMBED</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a3">BODYIED</rdg>
		
	</app>	</l>
<l n="51">
	<app>
		<rdg wit="a3"><del>SPREAD</del></rdg>
		<rdg wit="a4"><del>COLLECTED</del><del><add>SPREAD</add></del></rdg>
	</app>	</l>
<l n="52">
	<app>
		<rdg wit="a4"><del><add>BEECH</add></del> BODIES</rdg>
	</app>	</l>		
<l n="53">
	<app>
		<rdg wit="a4"><del>SPREAD </del><add>SPREAD</add></rdg>
	</app>	</l>		
<l n="54">
	<app>
		<rdg wit="a1">Bottlegreen</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a2 a3 a5 a6">BOTTLEgREEn</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a4">FROCKED</rdg>
	</app>	</l>	
<l n="55">
	<app>
		<rdg wit="a1">Frocked</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a2 a3">FROCKED</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a4">BOTTLEGREEn<note rend="Larich, Paula">There is a curved line extending upward from
			BOTTLEGREEn to FROCKED, possibly indicating that these two words should be switched,  which would
			match witnesses a1-a3 and a5-a6.</note></rdg>
	</app></l>
<l n="56">
	<app>
		<rdg wit="a1">Beech &#x2013; &#x2013; &#x2013; &#x2013; 
			&#x2013; <milestone unit="stanza"/></rdg>
		<rdg wit="a2">BEECH &#x2013;</rdg>	
		<rdg wit="a3"><del>BEECH</del></rdg>
		<rdg wit="a4">BEECHES</rdg>
	</app>	</l>

<l n="57">
	<app>
		
		<rdg wit="a2">&#x2014;</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a3">SPREAD</rdg>
	</app>	</l>	
<l n="58">
	<app>
		<rdg wit="a3">BEECH</rdg>
	</app>	</l>
<l n="59">
	<app>
		<rdg wit="a1">Hectic</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a2">HECTIC</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a3"><del>Hec</del>tic &#x2013; </rdg>
		<rdg wit="a4"><del>HECTIC</del>
		<add rend="superscript">KISS</add>
		 HAUnTED<del rend="superscript"><add>LOVE</add></del>
		<del rend="superscript"><add>SAP</add></del>
		</rdg>
	</app>	</l>
<l n="60">
	<app>
		<rdg wit="a1">Haunted</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a2">HAUnTED</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a3">KISS HAUnTED</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a5 a6">SPELL</rdg>
	</app>	</l>
<l n="61">
	<app>
		<rdg wit="a3">HECTIC</rdg>
	</app>	</l>	
<l n="62">
	<app>
		<rdg wit="a5 a6">COLD</rdg>
	</app></l>
<l n="63">
	<app>
		<rdg wit="a5 a6">GHOST</rdg>
		</app></l>
<l n="64">
	<app>
		<rdg wit="a5 a6">SCEnT</rdg>
	</app></l>
<l n="65">
	<app>
		<rdg wit="a5">MOOnS</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a6"><del>MOOnCUTS</del></rdg>
	</app></l>
<l n="66">
	<app>
		<rdg wit="a5">RIMRED</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a6"><del>TARnISHED</del></rdg>
	</app></l>
<l n="67">
	<app>
		<rdg wit="a5">TARnISHED</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a6"><del>REDRIM</del></rdg>
	</app></l>	
		
<l n="68">
	<app>
		<rdg wit="a1">Toadstoolquilts</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a2">TOADSTOOLqUI<add>L</add>LTS</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a3">MOSSTOADSTOOLqUILTS</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a4">MOSSTOADSTOOL<del><add>SMELL</add></del>
		<del rend="superscript"><add>BCO</add></del>
		<add rend="subscript">QUIILLTS</add>
		<del><add>CLASH</add></del></rdg>
		<rdg wit="a5"><del><add>HAUnTED</add></del>
			TOADSTOOLMOSS<del>QUILTSCLAS</del>SMELLCLASHES
				<note rend="Larich, Paula">There is a curved line running over TOADSTOOL and under
					MOSS, possibly indicated that these two words should be switched, which would match
					witnesses 3-5.</note></rdg>
		<rdg wit="a6">MOSSTOADSTOOLSMELLCLASHES</rdg>	
	</app>	</l>	
<l n="69">
	<app>
		<rdg wit="a1">Kissclangor &#x2013; &#x2013; &#x2013; </rdg>
	</app>	</l>	
<l n="70">
	<app>
		<rdg wit="a3"><del> HECTIC</del></rdg>
		<rdg wit="a4"><del>HAUNTED</del> <add>HECTIC</add></rdg>
		<rdg wit="a5"><del>TOLL</del><del rend="superscript"><add>RIngIng</add></del>
			<del><add>RIngIng</add></del>
			<add rend="subscript"><add rend="subscript">HECTIC HAUnTED</add></add></rdg>
		<rdg wit="a6">HECTIC HAUnTED</rdg>	
	</app>	</l>
<l n="71">
	<app>
		<rdg wit="a5"><del>HAUnTED</del></rdg>
	</app></l>	
<l n="72">
	<app>
		 <rdg wit="a3">HOTREEK<del>Ing</del>
			 <note rend="Larich, Paula">There is a curved line
			 extending upward from "HOTREEKING" to "HECTIC"
			 on the line above, possibly indicating that the two
			 words should change places.</note>
			 	<del>CLAngOR</del>
					<del rend="subscript">CLAMORIng</del>
					<note rend="Larich, Paula">"CLAngOR" and "CLAMORIng" appear
					to the right of "HOTREEKING," and appear
					to be a continuation of the words on the next  line, which
					appear to the left of the main text.</note></rdg>
		<rdg wit="a4">HOT</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a5">RIngIng <add>HOT <note rend="Larich, Paula">
			There is a curved line starting above "RIngIng" and ending below
				"HOT," possibly indicating that these two words should changes places.</note>BOOM</add></rdg>
		<rdg wit="a6">HOT <add rend="superscript">BOOM</add><del rend="superscript"><add>RIngIng</add></del>
			<del><add>RIngIng BOOM</add></del><del rend="subscript"><add>XRIng</add></del></rdg>	
	</app></l>
<l n="73">
	<app>
		<rdg wit="a3"><del>REEK</del> <del>REEK</del>
		<note>The following string appears to the left of the main text,
			and the author has indicated that "COMPOSED" should be
			inserted after "SCEnTS" and before 'gRAVE"</note>	
		<add rend="subscript">CLAngOR</add>
		<add rend="subscript"><add rend="subscript">CLASH</add></add>
		<add rend="subscript"><add rend="subscript"><del rend="subscript">CLAngORING</del>
			</add></add>
		<add rend="subscript"><add rend="subscript"><add rend="subscript">REEK</add>
			</add></add>
		<add rend="subscript"><add rend="subscript"><add rend="subscript">
			<del rend="subscript">CLAMORIng</del></add>
			</add></add>
		<add rend="subscript"><add rend="subscript"><add rend="subscript">
			<add rend="subscript"><del rend="subscript">CLAMORIng</del></add>
			</add></add></add>
		<add rend="subscript"><add rend="subscript"><add rend="subscript">
			<add rend="subscript"><add  rend="subscript"><add rend="subscript">CLASH</add>
			</add></add></add></add></add>
			<add rend="subscript"><add rend="subscript"><add rend="subscript">
			<add rend="subscript"><add  rend="subscript"><add rend="subscript">
			<add rend="subscript">COMPOSED</add>
			</add></add></add></add></add></add>
			</rdg>	
	</app></l>	

<l n="74">	
	<app>	
		<rdg wit="a3"><del><add>SMELLS</add></del>
		<del>SCEnTS</del>
		<del>CLAMORIng</del>
		<add rend="subscript"><del rend="subscript">CLAngOR</del></add>
		<add rend="subscript"><add rend="subscript">PALLRIng</add></add>
		<note rend="Larich, Paula">
			"CLAMORIng" to "PALLRIng" (on
			the following line) are written
			to the right of "SCEnTS" and appear
			to be a continuation of the notes two lines above (following
			"HOTREEKING""</note></rdg>
		<rdg wit="a4"><del>BOOM</del>
		<add rend="superscript">SCENTS</add></rdg>
	</app>	</l>	
<l n="75">
	<app>
		<rdg wit="a1">Composed
			<note rend="Larich, Paula">The word "SPACE" in written to the left,
			below "Kissclangor" and above "Composed."  It's
			likely a line space was indicated, because in this
			version, whenever em dashes follow a word, a line
			space follows.</note></rdg>
		<rdg wit="a2">COMPOSED</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a3">gRAVE</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a4"><del>gRAVE</del>
			<add rend="superscript">gRAVE</add></rdg>
		<rdg wit="a5"><del><add>COLD</add> </del><del>HOT</del>
			<add>SOLEMn</add> <add>gRAVE</add>
				<add rend="subscript">COMPOSED</add></rdg>
		<rdg wit="a6">COMPOSED</rdg>		
	</app></l>
<l n="76">
	<app>	
		<rdg wit="a1">Grave</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a2">gRAVE</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a3"><del>COMPOSED</del></rdg>
		<rdg wit="a4">COMPOSED</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a6">gRAVE
			<note rend="Larich, Paula">There is a curved lined extended downward from "COMPOSED" to
				"gRAVE" on the line below, possibliy indicated that these two words should switch
				places</note></rdg>
	</app></l>
<l n="77">
	<app>	
		<rdg wit="a1">Livid</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a2">LIVID</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a3">LIVID<del>RIngIng</del>
		<note rend="Larich, Paula">The following string appears to
			the right of "LIVID."</note>
		<add rend="subscript">CLAMOR<del>Ing Ing</del>
		<note rend="Larich, Paula">There is a curved line
		extending upward from "CLAMORIng" to "RIngIng"
		on the line above, possibly indicating that the two
		words should change places.</note> </add>
		<add rend="subscript">
		<del rend="subscript">PALL</del><add rend="subscript">TOngUE</add>
			<del rend="subscript">x</del></add>
		<add rend="subscript"><add rend="subscript">
			<del rend="subscript">RIngING</del></add></add>
		<add rend="subscript"><add rend="subscript">
		<add rend="subscript"><add rend="subscript">PALL<del>RIng</del>
			</add></add></add></add></rdg>
		<rdg wit="a4">LIVID <del rend="superscript"><add>
		ICY</add></del></rdg>
		</app></l>
<l n="78">
	<app>

		<rdg wit="a1">Hot</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a2">HOT</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a3"><del>PELLED</del> 
		<add rend="superscript">LIP<del>PED</del></add>
		<add rend="subscript">PEAL</add></rdg>
		<rdg wit="a4">PEAL</rdg>
		</app></l>
<l n="79">
	<app>
		<rdg wit="a2">KISSCLAngOR<note rend="Larich, Paula">
		There is a curved line extending upward from 
		"KISSCLAngOR" to "COMPOSED" four lines above, 
		possibly indicating that the two words should change 
		places. This would make witness 3 match line line 52 of 
		witness 1.</note></rdg>
		</app></l>
<l n="80">		
	<app>	
		<rdg wit="a1">Viril</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a2 a3">VIRIL</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a4"><del>ICILY</del>
		<del>SOLL</del> <add>VIRIL</add></rdg>
		
	</app></l>
<l n="81">
	<app>
		<rdg wit="a1">Toll &#x2014;<del><milestone unit="stanza"/></del></rdg>
		<rdg wit="a2">TOLL &#x2014;</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a3">TOLL<del>ED</del></rdg>
		<rdg wit="a4"><del>TOLLED</del>
			<add rend="superscript">CLAMORIng</add>
			<add rend="subscript">CLAngOR</add>
			<note rend="Larich, Paula">
			There is a curved line extending upward from 
			"CLAngOR" to "CLAMORIng" on the line above, 
			possibly indicating that the two words should change 
			places.</note><add>TOLL</add>
			<add rend="subscript">LIVID</add> <del><add>TO</add></del>
			<add rend="subscript">PEAL</add>
			<del><add>REST</add></del>
			<add rend="subscript"><add rend="subscript"><add rend="subscript"> PALL</add></add></add></rdg>
		<rdg wit="a5"><add>MOURnIng</add>TOLL</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a6"><del>MOURn TOLL</del></rdg>		
	</app></l>
<l n="82">
	<app>
		<rdg wit="a5"><del>HECTIC</del></rdg>
	</app></l>	
<l n="83">
	<app>
		<rdg wit="a5"><del>HAUnTED</del></rdg>
	</app></l>
<l n="84">
	<app>
		<rdg wit="a1">&#x2014; Clamor</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a2">CLAMOR</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a3"><del>CLAngORIng</del>
		<del rend="subscript">CLAMORIng</del>
		<add rend="subscript"><del rend="subscript"> CLAMORIng</del></add>
		<add rend="subscript"><add rend="subscript">
			<del rend="subscript">PALLRIng</del></add></add>
		<add rend="subscript"><add rend="subscript"><add rend="subscript">
			<del rend="subscript">CLAng</del></add></add></add>
			<add rend="subscript"><add rend="subscript"><add rend="subscript">
			<del rend="subscript">CLAMORIng</del></add></add></add>
		<add rend="subscript"><add rend="subscript"><add rend="subscript">
		<note rend="Larich, Paula">
		There is a curved line extending upward from 
		this "CLAMORIng" to "CLANGORIng," 
		possibly indicating that the two words should change 
		places.</note></add></add></add></rdg>
		
		</app></l>
<l n="85">
	<app>
		<rdg wit="a1">Lip<del rend="superscript">Lip</del></rdg>
		<rdg wit="a2">LIP &#x2014;</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a6">LIVID LIP <del><add>PEAL</add></del></rdg>
		</app></l>
<l n="86">
	<app>
		<rdg wit="a1">Pall</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a2">PALL</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a6">TOLL A PEAL</rdg>
		</app></l>
<l n="87">
	<app>
		<rdg wit="a1">Reek &#x2013; &#x2014; &#x2014; &#x2014;
		<milestone unit="stanza"/></rdg>
		<rdg wit="a2">REEK &#x2013;</rdg>
		</app></l>
<l n="88">
	<app>
		<rdg wit="a2">&#x2014;</rdg>
		</app></l>
<l n="89">
	<app>
		<rdg wit="a1">Cop<add rend="superscript">p</add>
		<del>r</del>y
			<note> "COPPRY" from COPPER" found to the right of "Copry"</note></rdg>
		<rdg wit="a2 a3 a4">COPRY</rdg>
		</app></l>
<l n="90">
	<app>
		<rdg wit="a1">Moons</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a2 a4">MOOnS</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a3">MOOnS <del>BLInD</del>
		<del rend="superscript">DULL</del>
		<add rend="superscript"><add rend="superscript">
		ICE</add></add> CUT</rdg>
		
		</app></l>
<l n="91">
	<app>
		<rdg wit="a1">Rimtarnished</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a2">RIMTARnISHED</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a3">TARnISHED 
			<del>ICECUT</del></rdg>
		<rdg wit="a4"><del rend="superscript"><add>ICY</add></del>TARnISHED</rdg>
		</app></l>
<l n="92">
	<app>
		<rdg wit="a3"><del>xxx</del>RIM<del>S</del>
			<del>ICE</del>
			<add >BLIND</add></rdg>
		<rdg wit="a4"><add>HALF</add>RIMS<del>xx</del><note rend="Larich, Paula">There is a curved lines
			extending upward from RIMS to TARnISHED, possibly indicating that these two words should be switched.</note></rdg>
	</app></l>	
<l n="93">
	<app>
		<rdg wit="a1">Icecut</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a2">ICECUT</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a3"><del>ICYE</del>
			<del>DULL</del>
			<del><add>FAIRY</add></del>
				<add><add><add rend="subscript">HOSTIL</add></add></add></rdg>
		<rdg wit="a4"><del>COLD</del>
			<del rend="superscript"><add>ICY</add></del></rdg>
		</app></l>
<l n="94">
	<app>
		<rdg wit="a4"><del>gHOST</del></rdg>
	</app></l>	
<l  n="95">
	<app>
			<rdg wit="a4"><del>SCENT</del>
			<add rend="superscript">ICE</add>
			<del rend="superscript"><add>ICY</add></del></rdg>
		</app></l>	
<l n="96">
	<app>
		<rdg wit="a1">Hostil</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a2">HOSTIL</rdg>
	</app></l>

<l n="97">
	<app>
		<rdg wit="a1">Lit</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a2">LIT</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a3"><del>LIT</del>
			<add rend="subscript">LIT</add></rdg>
		
	</app></l>
<l n="98">
	<app>
		<rdg wit="a1">Fairy</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a2">FAIRY</rdg>
	</app></l>	

<l n="97">
	<app>
		<rdg wit="a1">Blind &#x2013;  &#x2013;  &#x2013;<milestone unit="stanza"/></rdg>
		<rdg wit="a2"><del>xxxxx</del>
			<add rend="superscript">BLIND</add>
			&#x2013; &#x2013; &#x2013; &#x2013; &#x2013;</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a3"><del>SPELL</del>
			<del>CUT</del>
			<del rend="subscript">BLInD</del></rdg>
		<rdg wit="a4"><add>ICE</add> SPELL</rdg>	
		</app></l>
<l n="98">
	<app>
		
		<rdg wit="a2">&#x2014; </rdg>
		</app></l>		
<l n="99">
	<app>
		
		<rdg wit="a1">Mesh</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a2">MESH</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a3">EARTH <del><add>IMAgE</add></del></rdg>
		<rdg wit="a4">EARTH</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a5">EARTH HEART<note rend="Larich, Paula">
			Appears on two lines.  "EARTH HEART" to "OCH" in this
			witness appear as a column in between witness 5 and
			witness 6.</note></rdg>
		<rdg wit="a6">EARTH HEART</rdg>
		</app></l>	
<l n="100">
	<app>
		<rdg wit="a1">Seeps</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a2 a3 a4">SEEPS</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a5">BLEED<del>iNG</del><add rend="superscript">S</add></rdg>
		<rdg wit="a6"><del>BLEEDS</del>
			<add rend="subscript">SEEPS</add></rdg>
		</app></l>		
<l n="101">
	<app>
		<rdg wit="a6"><del>BLEED</del></rdg>
	</app></l>	
<l n="102">
	<app>
		<rdg wit="a1">Limp</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a2 a3 a4">LIMP</rdg>
		</app></l>	
<l n="103">
	<app>
		<rdg wit="a1">Veins</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a2 a3 a4">VEInS</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a6"><del>BL</del> <del>VEInS</del></rdg>
		</app></l>
<l n="104">
	<app>
		
		<rdg wit="a1">Lass</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a2 a3 a4">LASS</rdg>
		</app></l>
<l n="105">
	<app>
		
		<rdg wit="a1">Sap</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a2 a3 a4">SAP</rdg>
		</app></l>	
<l n="106">
	<app>
		
		<rdg wit="a1">In</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a2">In &#x2013; </rdg>
		<rdg wit="a4">BLOOD</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a6"><del>BLEED</del></rdg>
		</app></l>
<l n="107">
	<app>
		
		<rdg wit="a1">Fount</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a2">FOUnT</rdg>		
		</app></l>
<l n="108">
	<app>
		<rdg wit="a1">Deep &#x2013;  &#x2013;  &#x2013;  &#x2013;  &#x2013;</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a2">DEEP &#x2013;  &#x2013;
			<note> There is an "s" curve starting at  "In" and ending at "FOUnT," and a straight line
				from these three words to the left margin, where is found "In FOUnT DEEP."</note></rdg>
		<rdg wit="a3 a4">DEEP</rdg>
		
			</app></l>	
<l n="109">
	<app>
		<rdg wit="a3"><del>VAULT</del></rdg>
		<rdg wit="a4"><add rend="superscript">DEEP</add>WITHIn</rdg>	
		<rdg wit="a6"><del>WITHIn</del></rdg>
		
		</app></l>
<l n="110">
	<app>
		<rdg wit="a3"><del>WITHIn</del>
			<add rend="superscript">FOUNT</add></rdg>
		<rdg wit="a4">VAULT <note>There is a curved line extending downward from "WITHIN" to "VAULT,"</note></rdg>
		<rdg wit="a6">BLOOD</rdg>
		
	</app></l>
<l n="111">
	<app>
		<rdg wit="a3">WITHIn</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a6"><add>LIMP</add>FROM
			<note rend="Larich, Paula">There is a straight line connecting
				"LIMP" on the left to "FROM" on the right.</note></rdg>
	</app></l>
<l n="112">
	<app>
		<rdg wit="a6"><add>LASSITUDE</add> VEIn
			<del rend="superscript"><add>LASS</add></del></rdg>
			</app></l>
<l n="113">
	<app>
		<rdg wit="a1">Unflexed </rdg>
		<rdg wit="a2 a3 a4 a5">UnFLEXED</rdg>
	</app></l>
<l n="114">
	<app>
		<rdg wit="a1">Fixed &#x2013;  &#x2013; &#x2013; &#x2013; &#x2013; &#x2013; &#x2013;</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a2">FIXED  &#x2013; &#x2013; &#x2013; &#x2013; &#x2013; &#x2013; </rdg>		
		<rdg wit="a3 a4 a5">FIXED</rdg>	
		
		</app></l>

<l n="115">
	<app>
		<rdg wit="a2"> &#x2014;  &#x2014;  &#x2014;  &#x2014;  &#x2014; </rdg>
	</app></l>
<l n="116">
	<app>
		<rdg wit="a1">Still</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a2 a3 a4 a5">STILL</rdg>
		</app></l>	
<l n="117">
	<app>
		<rdg wit="a1">Wait &#x2013;</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a2">WAIT&#x2014;&#x2014;</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a3 a4 a5">WAIT</rdg>
		
	</app>	</l>
<l n="119">
	<app>
		<rdg wit="a1">Still:</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a2 a3  a4 a5">STILL</rdg>
		
	</app>		</l>		
<l n="118">
	<app>
		<rdg wit="a1">List:</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a2 a5">LIST:</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a3 a4">LIST</rdg>
		
	</app>		</l>

<l n="119">
	<app>
		<rdg wit="a1">"Ocho</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a2">"OCHO</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a3 a4 a5">OCHO</rdg>
		
	</app>		</l>	
<l n="120">
	<app>
		<rdg wit="a1">Cho</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a2 a3 a4 a5">CHO</rdg>
	</app>		</l>	
<l n="121">
	<app>
		<rdg wit="a1">Och!"</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a2">OCH"!</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a3  a4 a5">OCH</rdg>
		
	</app>		</l>		
<l n="122">
	<app>
		<rdg wit="a1">Heart</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a2 a3 a4">HEART</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a5">MOTHER</rdg>
	</app>		</l>			
<l n="123">
	<app>
		<rdg wit="a1">Squalls!</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a2">SqUALLS!</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a3 a4 a5">SOBBS</rdg>
		
	</app>		</l>	
<l n="124">
	<app>
		<rdg wit="a1">Quiet</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a2 a3 a4">qUIET</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a5">HUSH</rdg>
	</app>		</l>	
<l n="125">
	<app>
		<rdg wit="a1">All&#x2013;</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a2">ALL&#x2014;</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a3 a4 a5">ALL</rdg>
		
	</app>		</l>	
<l n="126">
	<app>
		<rdg wit="a1">Hush!</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a2">HUSH!</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a3 a4">HUSH</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a5">qUIET <note rend="Larich, Paula">There is a curved line extending
			upward from "qUIET" to "ALL," suggesting that these two words should perhaps
			be switched.</note></rdg>
	</app>		</l>	
<l n="127">
	<app>
		<rdg wit="a5">HUSH</rdg>
	</app></l>
		
<l n="128">
	<app>
		<rdg wit="a1">"Cho </rdg>
		<rdg wit="a2">"CHO</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a3 a4">CHO</rdg>
	<rdg wit="a5">CHO!</rdg>	
	</app>		</l>	
<l n="129">
	<app>
		<rdg wit="a1">Och</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a2 a3 a4">OCH</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a5">OCH!</rdg>
	</app>		</l>	
<l n="130">
	<app>
		<rdg wit="a1">Cho!"</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a2">CHO"</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a3 a4">CHO</rdg>
	</app>		</l>		

<l n="131">
	<app>
		<rdg wit="a1">"Hush!</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a2">HUSH!</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a3 a4">HUSH</rdg>
		
	</app>		</l>		
<l n="132">
	<app>
		<rdg wit="a1">Och&#x2013; &#x2013; &#x2013; </rdg>
		<rdg wit="a2">OCH &#x2013; &#x2013;</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a3 a4">MOTHER</rdg>
	</app>		</l>	

<l n="133">
	<app>
		<rdg wit="a1">Mother&#x2013; &#x2013;  &#x2013;  </rdg>
		<rdg wit="a2">MOTHER&#x2013; &#x2013;  &#x2013;  </rdg>
		<rdg wit="a3">M<del>O</del>THER</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a4">MOTHER</rdg>
	</app>		</l>			
<l n="134">
	<app>
		<rdg wit="a1">&#x2013; &#x2013; &#x2013; &#x2013; &#x2013; &#x2013; &#x2014;</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a2">&#x2013; &#x2013; &#x2013; &#x2013; &#x2013;</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a3"><del>O</del>CH</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a4">OCH</rdg>
	</app>		</l>	
<l n="135">
	<app>
		<rdg wit="a1">&#x2013; &#x2013; &#x2013; &#x2013; &#x2013; &#x2013; &#x2014;</rdg>
		<rdg wit="a2">&#x2013; &#x2013; &#x2013; &#x2013; &#x2013; &#x2013; &#x2014;</rdg>
		
	</app>		</l>	
<l n="136">
	<app>
		<rdg wit="a2">E.v.<note rend="Larich, Paula">The following initials indicate the Baroness's initials: E.v. F.L.</note></rdg>	
	</app></l>	
<l n="137">
	<app>
		<rdg wit="a2">F.</rdg>	
	</app></l>		
<l n="138">
	<app>
		<rdg wit="a2">L.</rdg>	
	</app></l>			
		
	
			
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